Room 20

Room 20 To Be Performed In Southampton

Room 20 is being presented as part of the Southampton University Students’ Union Theatre Group’s Showcase 2010 on Saturday 24th April.

My short play in three acts, was written in 2008 as an early assignment for the Nuffield Theatre Writers Group and will be performed with six other plays from members of the 4th group as well as other short plays/sketches written and produced by university students.

Tickets are £6.30 (£4.30 students) and are available from the Nuffield Theatre Box Office on 02830 671771. There are two performance times, 5pm and 8pm and the show lasts for approximately two hours.

Room 20 is in silence – at least it should be.

15 year old Jason Forrest is nearing the end of his second day of Isolation for the relentless bullying of another student, but Mr Brooks is supervising the last couple of periods – and he’s not in the mood for marking.

This will be the play’s first actual performance (it had a rehearsed reading in London in December 2008) and I’m looking forward to seeing what Student Director Jonny Haines has done with it.

(I hasten to add, it should be interesting to watch from my ‘writer’s’ perspective since initial discussion showed the director didn’t seem to understand what my play was actually about; Having his own complex ideas about the play’s simple theme. Oh well, I hope it’s worked out okay for him, and at least it’s being performed!)

News Times Two

Firstly, some news, finally, from the Bush Theatre.

I sent them Spaceboy back in August, and was beginning to wonder what happened, thinking I had somehow missed the ‘no thanks’ email months ago.

It appears the reason it took so long was because it went further; the Bush readers found it a “really interesting piece” and passed it on to their ‘creative associates’ for “a second look”.

Sadly, they felt they couldn’t develop it as a production at the Bush, but suggested a couple of other theatres to send it to, which indeed I shall.

And secondly, I also received news today that Room 20 will be performed twice on Saturday 24th April at Southampton University as part of their ‘Nuffield Writers Showcase’.

A group of student directors and actors are producing seven of the ten minute plays written by members of the 4th Nuffield Theatre Writers Group as one of our assignments.

I’m looking forward to meeting my play’s directorJonny Baynham next week.

Putting The Words Out

Well, I’ve finally gotten around to sending Spaceboy off to various places in the hope someone will do something with it.

I’ve sent copies to the Loft Theatre Company (Lemington Spa) for their New Writing Competition and High Tide for their competiton for the 2010 Festival in Haleswork, Suffolk.

In addition I’ve a sent Spaceboy to the Bush Theatre as an example of my (new) writing. (I sent the Bush a copy of Kath and Kin nearly two years ago and if they remember me then hopefully they’ll see I have improved significantly since becoming part of the Nuffield Theatre Writers Group.)

It’ll be at least four months before I hear anything from these places, if at all, so I’m not holding my breath.

I’ve also sent Room 20 to the Off Cut Festival (Islington) – just made Monday’s deadline, lol – and we’ll see what happens with that too. The short-listed plays, to be announced 1st September, will be performed at the festival in Sept/Oct. Fingers crossed, then.

I feel my work is professional enough now to be sent out, though whether any of it will be considered professional enough to be produced is an entirely different matter.

We’ll see.

Ha Ha!

Just had an email from Off Cut Festival while editing this very post!

Now, to put this into perspective, the deadline was 5pm on Monday.

And, in less than 48 hours, they have read every single submitted play, chosen a short-list of 24 and emailed everybody else!

“We have be (sic) overwhelmed by the number of submissions, the quality of which has made our selection process very difficult.”

Umm, yeah, well, call me cynical, but I reckon they must have pretty much decided on their 24 before the deadline.

Doesn’t give me much faith in writing competitions.

Third!

Just had word that Room 20 came 3rd in the competition at AWL on Monday night!

Prizes were given for runner up and first place on the night, (the audience cast votes in a secret ballot) but I had no idea how we did, and didn’t want to ask because I didn’t want to be disappointed since the standard was very good.

So 3rd out of 8 plays performed and 13 submitted isn’t bad at all.

I’m very pleased.

Praise For Room 20

Having just checked my email before going to bed, I have received one from a long standing AWL member who was in the audience watching Room 20 last night.

I’m so pleased, I thought I’d share it with you…

Hi Paul,

Tony gave me your e-mail address, as I just wanted to congratulate you on your competition play.

I absolutely loved it, and thought the dialogue was very real, having had 4 teenagers of my own!

One of my sons is also in the 1st series of ‘Skins’, so liked the reference.

Best wishes,

Lucy Appleby

Thanks, Lucy!

A ‘Powerful’ Room 20

Wow, what a feeling!

The first professional performance of a play I have written took place last night in Hammersmith, London W6.

Though having any performance of a play is a great achievement for any writer, it’s important for me as an aspiring playwright to move forwards from writing and directing my own work with local amateur dramatic groups to getting my work professionally produced.

I also had my first experience of directing professional actors, which to be honest was a bit daunting at first, but I soon took it in my stride. I had a vision of the characters and how they talked etc and as soon as I got this across to the actors, they responded well and their professionalism bore more than just fruit.

Because of the nature of the evening we were allocated an hour for what should have been a quick discussion and ‘table reading’, and then a couple of run-throughs. Sadly, the actor playing the teacher was delayed and we ended up with about 20 minutes of rehearsal time in which we had a discussion, reading and runthrough all at once.

There simply wasn’t the time for me to do my usual ‘I wont interrupt but will just bring it up in passing later’ – I had to get right on in there and ‘direct’.

The actors had their ideas, having studied the text for the last couple of weeks, but they were looking to me as their director (and in this case, as the playwright too) for guidance and of course ‘direction’ on wether what they had interpreted was right for the piece.

I’m actually amazed how much I learnt about myself as a director in the 20 minutes I had working with these professional actors. I’m so grateful for the experience and really look forward to doing this more.

There was a smaller than usual audience of about 50 last night, and when it was time for Room 20‘s debut performance I was at the back – with a small hand bell!

Although I had taken my ever faithful Mac with me, complete with a sound effect of a school bell ready and waiting in iTunes, it wouldn’t play.

I download the file from the internet a few days ago, and for some reason, although it is saved as an mp3 file in iTunes, I have to be connected to the internet to play it. Weird.

Luckily I discovered all this in the interval, and then had to think frantically about how I was going to do a sound effect of a school bell.

I managed to catch the eye of the building’s manager and beckoned him outside the room to explain my predicament. Thankfully he took up the challenge of a hunt and just as the play was being introduced a couple of minutes later, he appeared with three different bells – god knows where from – and I just grabbed one and rang it as the play started in front of me!

It was great to watch, and weird, in the sense that I was rather detached.

I’d spent a lot of time interviewing some of the young people from the Riverside Youth Theatre during the summer, from which the idea for the story and indeed the style of dialogue came, and after at least twenty hours of writing and editing for what was a short play of about ten-fifteen minutes (In my haste of trying to source a bell sound effect, I forget to time it.) it was now being performed and coming to life in front of me.

It had come from inside my head and was now ‘alive’ going into other peoples’ heads, and as such wasn’t mine any more. Very weird feeling.

There were a few ‘nervous’ laughs at the beginning, as always seems to be the case when watching an evening of plays in which you don’t know if what you’re going to see next is a straight play or a comedy.

You end up laughing a little even, if a line or action wasn’t particularly funny, just so that you don’t feel a pratt for not laughing if indeed the play is supposed to be a comedy. Then when you realise it’s a serious play, the laughter stops and hopefully by then your hooked.

This is what happened last night and I was so pleased with the subsequent deathly silence from the audience, not a rustle of sweets, or shift of position on the chair, or a checking of the watch, nothing – just silence. It was great!

By Act III, (Room 20 was written as part of my Nuffield Theatre Writers Group coursework and the brief was to write a ten minute play in 3 acts) the actors had really gotten into their parts, which was fantastic considering they’d only had 20 minutes of rehearsal with each other, and ‘Jase’s last speech in which he really shows his insecurities and the true reason for his bullying was very emotional for me.

You’d have thought I would have been fine with it, but for me it was exactly the same as if I had been watching a moving part of a film or another play. The fact that it was my play and I had written it and I knew exactly what was coming didn’t make any difference.

I was very surprised to have felt like that, which is a true testament to the quality of the acting: In fact a couple of members of the audience said it was ‘powerful’ – which was a great compliment.

Talking to the actor afterwards, he said he could really feel for ‘Jase’ at that point and had felt he had ‘got inside him’ which for me was an odd thing to hear, but I could see exactly what he meant, and it had definitely showed.

Brilliant.

I must thank the actors Lee Peck and Phil Gerrard for a great performance and bringing the characters of the bullying student ‘Jase’ and the caring teacher ‘Tim’ to life. It was great to watch. It really was a pleasure to work with them and to see the results of their hard work – Thanks guys!

Also, thanks to Mark, Adam, Fleur and Viv, from the Riverside Youth Theatre who came to see the performance. It was so great to have your support, guys – Thanks!

So, the first professional script-in-hand performance (rehearsed reading) of my work has made it from the page to the stage as they say, and boy am I pleased with the results.

It didn’t win the competition, but I’m not surprised given the high standard of the entries. I was up against professional playwrights all used to having their work performed, so it was really comforting to hear that mine was of an equal standard and didn’t stand out as being any different from them in terms of the quality of the work.

So, onwards an upwards. Time to get on with some more writing. I’m working on my next piece of coursework for the Nuffield Theatre Writers Group, a 44 minute radio play suitable for the afternoon slot on Radio 4. The third speaking character that I have been looking for but has held me up for a few weeks, came to me as I was waking up this morning, so I’m really pleased.

I now need to put in a lot of work, as it’s due by the middle/end of February, and the rest of December is basically booked up with event work in Coventry and a Christmas holiday with Rich in Italy. (Lake Garda with day trips to Verona on Chistmas Eve and Venice on Boxing Day! Lovely!)

Right, I’m off…

Oh, and a PS: My one act play ‘A Spade, A Clock and Pair of Bloody Scissors!’ (written in February 2006) will be getting performed in the New Year, (4th Jan) but more on that in another post.

Oh and a PPS: Happy Birthday, Dad!

Room 20 Now Cast

Just a quick reminder that my short play Room 20 (written as part of my Nuffield Theatre Writers Group coursework) will be performed in London next Monday (15th).

SYNOPSIS
Room 20 is in silence – at least it should be. 15 year old Jason Azim is nearing the end of his second day of Isolation for the relentless bullying of another student, but Mr Brooks is supervising the last couple of periods – and he’s not in the mood for marking.

CAST
Jase: Lee Peck
Tim: Phil Gerrard

VENUE
Actors and Writers London (AWL)
Bridge Room/Bar
4th Floor
The Polish Centre
238 King Street
Hammersmith
London W6 0RF

DETAILS
Room 20 will be one of eight plays performed as part of an AWL competition night. The performances will be script-in-hand rehearsed readings.

TICKETS
£5 on the door.

Please let me know if you intend to come so I can meet up with you.

Room 20 To Be Performed In London

Just a quick one, as I have now started writing a radio play which I am very exited about!

Something else I’m very excited about is: Room 20 will be performed in London.

I am a member of Actors & Writers London (AWL), London’s longest-running professional play-reading forum for actors and writers. The group meets in Hammersmith, London W6, on alternate Monday evenings for rehearsed readings and chaired discussions of new plays.

A couple of times a year, the group holds a competition night for their writers, and I’m pleased to say that Room 20 has been selected to be performed in the next competition on December 15th.

My play is currently being cast; I’ll keep you posted.

Room 20

As well as the homework set after each fortnightly session at the Nuffield Theatre Writers Group, we are also given longer term projects that build on all the skills we have been studying in the sessions with the aim of writing a full length play at the end of the programme.

Our first such project was a short two scene piece (literally two pages) made up entirely of snippets of overheard conversation – I did mine after a trip to Morrisons! It’s here if you are interested.

Our next project (over the summer) was our first ‘play’. The brief was to write a 10 minute play (a popular format in the States, I understand) in 3 acts.

Why 3 acts?

Well, the brief goes back to the time our mentor, Director, John Burgess, was Head of New Writing at the National Theatre.

One year, there was a surpless in the budget and an idea was put forward to commission 10 writers to write a 10 minute play each. It was decided that to make the performances much more interesting for the audience, the plays would need to be written in three acts, that way Act I of the first play could be performed, followed by Act I of the second, and then of the third, and then back to Act 2 of the first play, etc.

The result was an evening of quite different plays, where you didn’t know which installment was coming up next, almost like a ‘soap opera’ with individual stories being played out.

Well, the summer is now over, and Room 20 has made it out of my head, through my MackBook, on to paper and down to Southampton (and in London by now!) and I’m happy with it.

Mind you, it’s taken long enough. I had no idea how much work could possibly be involved in writing a ten minute play.

There were a few last minute changes (including a character name which I knew needed changing, but was stuck on – Thanks Tom) but I have tried to include all the things I have learnt so far, and hope I have been able to write something good and worth reading; a complete play with believable characters and a plot and all in 10 minutes. Not easy, I can assure you.

Anyway, I handed it in last Thursday at our writers group meeting, and as soon as I had we were being set our next project. We now have until the end of February to write a 44 minute radio play.

44 minutes?

Yep, that’s the length needed for the afternoon play slot on Radio 4. We were given three examples, one of which was directed by John, and another was written by Sarah Daniels.

Time to study the format. Gonna be tricky. Haven’t got a clue where to start!

Umm, ideas anyone?

Must end by saying some thank yous.

Writing, I’m learning, isn’t necessarily a solitary job. Many people’s time and efforts have gone into Room 20.

I see things, I overhear things, I think things, I listen to things; and they all go into my writing. (Even a comment said to me in passing is now an important part of the end of the play – Thanks Mike.)

Sometimes, however I need somewhere to start. And for this play I ‘interviewed’ some of the young people from the Riverside Youth Theatre, and from that came the idea for the play and the inspiration for the characters and the plot.

So a big-massive-huge-gynormous thank you from me to:

Tom Addy
Mark Forrest
Peter Williams
Annabel Smith
Katherine Parkinson

and
Michael Smith

Room 20 is now here on my blog for downloading if you want to read it.

Any comments good or bad, very much appreciated.